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Into the Rock

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I feel the world
creeping—eating—alive
but I sink down
through the strata
farther below by something
more willful than gravity
like my grip
has slipped I’m falling
into earthen wounds
the deeps of oceanic trenches
and limestone cenotes
slow as the gaping
geologic time scale
Just wrote this. I thought it worked better without punctuation, but line 2 may suffer for it. 
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Nimbue's avatar
Especially love the ending.  Really wonderful imagery lately.